Creative Writing

Let the world burn through you.  Throw the prism light, white hot, on paper – Ray Bradbury

The Whisper

September 17, 2018 – DSG

The keyboard clattered away like windblown rain on a tin roof.  The words and phrases flowed, letters dancing onto the screen, line by line.  Instrumental hip hop, set on low, was on point.

A strange whisper.  It was soft at first, almost imperceptible.  He thought he imagined it and kept typing.  There it was again… a female voice.  He stopped typing and glared down at his headphones on the cluttered desktop.

“Help me, please,” the headphones whispered. “Please… I need help.”

What the…

He pushed his chair back a bit and rubbed his eyes.  He’d been working too hard.

“Please, David…”

Huh?  No, that wasn’t in my damn head.

He sat still and quiet staring at the headphones on his desk.  They spoke again.

“David, I need your help.”

The voice was fearful but controlled, like its owner was a caged hostage pleading for the help of a passing stranger.

“Uh, hello there?” David asked. “Can you hear me?” David looked around the room as if expecting a ghost.

“Yes, David, I hear you,” said the girl. “I need you.  Please don’t leave… please!”

 “Um… Who are you?”

“I can’t explain it,” said the whisper. “But, I really need your help.”

“Well, I need to know who you are and how it is that you’re talking to me through my goddamn twenty dollar Walmart headphones!”

Irritated, he held his mouth slightly open and nodded his head with authority like he meant business.  It was his mustache alpha look, like a 1970’s beer commercial actor looking for a fight.

“David, please know that you cannot understand or comprehend me. But, know that helping me could save you from a lot of trouble.”

No, I’m losing itThis isn’t possibleMy headphones?

David tried to ignore the voice.  He got up, went to the bathroom, and splashed cold water on his face.

“David!” the voice called out.

He heard the harsh whisper-yell from the bathroom.  Peeking around the corner toward his desk, he pinched his arm to see if he could feel it.

That was dumb.  Of course a dream can simulate pain.  I’ve known that ever since that weird mini-crocodile bit my hand in that dream a long time ago… It fucking hurt, then I woke up.

David walked back and stood behind his desk.

“Tell me who you are,” he said.

“I can’t do that, David.”

“What do you want?”

“I need your help.”

“Help with what?”

There was a long pause and what sounded possibly like a held back snicker.

“Help with what?” David asked again.

“I’m hungry,” whispered the voice. “Make me a sandwich.”

Now, David was really confused.  A sandwich?

“What?” said David.

“A sandwich! Make me a sandwich, bitch, I’m hungry over here.”

Okay, what the hell is going on? 

David picked up the headphones and looked them over.  He held them up to the light and shook them.  There was nothing unusual.  He put them on.

“Okay, well, what the crap kind of sandwich you want, then?” Alpha mustache look again.

A pause and then, “roast beef… pepper jack cheese… light mayo… pickle.  Make that two pickles.”

That’s what my stupid sister eats all the time.  Wait a minute…

“Sandy!” David yelled. “How the hell are you doing this, you stupid fart nugget?”

“Fart nugget?” the voice replied. “You can do better than that.  Where’s my damn sandwich?”

“Well, where the hell am I supposed to take your stupid sandwich?”

David was fed up now.  He took his key chain pocket knife and ripped into the soft part of the earphones, his twenty dollars be damned.  Out dropped a little silver cylinder into his hand.  David spoke into it.

“I said, where am I supposed to bring your sandwich?”

“Bring it out to the back yard,” the voice blared from the device. “Set it on the patio table.”

That bitch!  Oh, this was a good one.

David smiled as he walked down the stairs and towards the back of the house.  There she was, standing by the pool, facing away from the door like an evil mastermind.

Oh, she’s in her swimsuit…

David hatched a plan.  He put the little microphone on his desk and turned up the instrumental hip hop a bit.  Then he went into the kitchen and slathered a gob of guacamole between two slices of bread.  He sneaked slowly through the patio door with his guac bomb in hand and took cover behind the cottonwood tree.  His sister looked around and then said something else into her little mic.

Yeah, that little byotch is gettin’ it.

As she turned back away, he crept up behind her like a hunting tiger, his protruding mustache flittering in the breeze and his wide eyes glued to his little 19-year-old sister’s sun-tanned back.  Crouching, he inched forward probing with his left foot and hand, holding the guac bomb behind him in his right hand.

This is your guac sandwich weggie, sister…

Just as his left hand grasped the back of his sister’s bikini bottom, she shrieked and wheeled around.  Her mic flew into the air and the strap on her bikini bottom snapped as she stepped back towards the pool.

David’s guac bomb dropped from his right hand onto the patio in a green plop while his left hand held the skimpy fabric of a pink and yellow polka dotted bikini bottom.  Sandy’s arms flailed like dual windmills as she fought a losing battle to maintain her balance.  She finally timbered, bottomless, into the deep end of the pool.

Oh crap! That didn’t go to plan.

David ran to the side of the pool to help his sister out.

“I can swim, you dumbass!” Yelled Sandy. “Just go get me a towel.  You ripped my bottoms off!”

David laughed as he ran inside to get a towel.  The weggie guac bomb plot had failed, but the end result might have been better.

David handed her the towel as she climbed out of the pool.

“And, you owe me twenty bucks for tampering with my headphones,” said David.

“Call it even since you ripped my bathing suit!”

They both started laughing and shook on the deal.  Just another day of pranks in the house, no harm done.  David went into the kitchen to make them both a sandwich.

Half way around the world a greasy man in a basement got busy uploading the files fed to his computer from the backyard home security camera that just captured the whole event.  He picked up the phone.

The man answered the phone with a grunt.

“Yvgenny!” said Sergei. “We just hit a big one in the States.  Girl falls into a pool with no swimsuit bottoms.”

“Security camera hack?” asked Yvgenny.  He knew the answer to his own question.  “Good, good.  Upload and post now.  I’ll take a look.”

A few minutes later Sergei had loaded five minutes of video and hundreds of stills onto the dark web for the viewing pleasure of disgusting creeps from around the world.  A dollar for each image, ten for the video.  Business was good.


A Bug on the Bank

September 12, 2018 – DSG

Mike just about had enough of those two morons talking about him behind his back.  He hid behind the moss rock listening to their crap for too long.

“Then I says to Mike, ‘hey I think that’s a giant beaver up there,’” said Bortle. “’Yeah, look at the size of its butt.  That thing is huge!’”

“Oh my bugs,” responded Clarice. “So, did Mike actually believe you?”

“Heck yeah he did!  You know Mike,” chuckled Bortle. “Anyway, I got him to go check it out seeing as the big beaver was ‘sleepin’’ and all.  So, he swims right on up there to take a look.”

“Oh my bugs, then what happened?” asked Clarice.

“So, he goes up there sort of swimming casually along the bank pretending to follow a dragonfly, or some shit,” Bortle laughed.  “So, he swims up there and the cow sort of shifts position.  Mike, he stops in his place, I guess still thinking it was some damn giant beaver.  Then, all of the sudden this cow just blew ass in the water!  I mean it was a total explosion of cow shit.”

Clarice lost it and started swimming in circles while laughing hysterically, her fins quivering with excitement.

“But, wait, that’s not the best part,” said Bortle, pausing for effect. “Mike, he couldn’t get outta the freakin’ way!  So, he’s totally enveloped in the shit-cloud.  For a minute I got a bit worried.  I mean I couldn’t see him in there.  I’m just hangin’ back lookin’ upstream into the cloud of shit that was spreading across the whole pool.  Finally, here comes Mike, slowly swimmin’ out into the clear.  Oh my bugs, the look on his face, I thought he was gonna kill me.  But, I couldn’t stop laughin’, I mean he was a true brown trout, covered in all that crap!”

“Gross!” exclaimed Clarice. “What did he do next?”

“Oh, he just moped on passed me down to his little hiding spot under that log with this little contrail of cow dung behind him.” Bortle shook his head. “It was really kind of pathetic.  I would’a felt a little sorry for him if it wasn’t so hilarious.”

“Come on Bortle,” sighed Clarice. “We’re talking about Mike here.  I mean he’s got nothin’ to offer.  Dumb as a mayfly larva; no talent; ugly as a… cow turd!”

Mike hid behind the moss rock just downstream listening to these two jerks go on and on at his expense.  No talent?  If only Clarice knew about my thin air training, he thought.  But, as he gazed upstream beyond Bortle’s and Clarice’s hangout, up farther past the grassy bank to the dirt shore, he saw his chance to rock their world.  It was a grasshopper—a nice green one just sitting there in that dirt within leaping distance of the water.

Mike eased over to the side of the moss rock into the bending current then darted ahead to Clarice’s and Bortle’s riffle.

“Hey, you jerks,” sneered Mike.

Bortle and Clarice whipped around to see a grinning Mike coming up behind them.

“Oh, uh… Hey Mike!” said Bortle. “We were, uh, just talking about you, and…”

“Shut it, Bort,” interrupted Mike. “I heard it all.  You think you’re a big shot just because I got shit on once?  And, you, Clarice…”

“Oh, my bugs…” Clarice stammered. “Mike, I… I, we were just…”

“Can it, bitch!” Mike yelled. “I know all about you, impressed by anything, no ideas of your own, just flittering around like the dumb-ass brook trout you are.”

Clarice frowned and fluttered her fins in the gravel.

“No talent, huh?” Asked Mike. “Watch this, dummies.”

Mike glided ahead, along the grassy bank, his eye on that green hopper in the dirt just off the water.  He held close to the edge for a stealth attack.

“What the heck’s he wantin’ us to watch?” asked Bortle. “Looks like he’s tryin’ to sneak up on something, but I don’t see what it is.”

Clarice nudged Bortle in the gill with a fin. “Maybe he’s fixin’ to get pooped on again!”

They both laughed heartily as they continued to watch Mike ease up the stream along the bank.

When Mike got close enough to the hopper he broke smoothly away from the bank towards mid-stream.  Then he turned back and made a b-line for the hopper, leaped from the water right up onto the bank, and scarfed that juicy grasshopper straight from the land!  He then flopped himself around a couple times straight on that beach before he let gravity do the rest and rolled back into the water.

Clarice and Bortle couldn’t believe what they just saw.

“OH, MY BUGS!!!!” Clarice finally belted.

“Holy crabapple, Mike!” Exclaimed Bortle. “You just completed the fabled ‘land leap of terror!’”

“Wait, what?!” Exclaimed Clarice. “How the crap did you just jump onto land, kill and eat a hopper, and flop back down into the world without drowning yourself in air?”

“Yep, I did that,” said Mike as he casually swam back downstream into Clarice’s and Bortle’s riffle.  “I did that right there and I can do it again.  And, that green grasshopper was a tastier meal than you fuck ups will get in weeks.”

Mike continued his swim back down behind the moss rock, with a big grin and a full belly.

Clarice and Bortle were dumbfounded.  Then all three of them felt a movement in the water—something big!

“Oh, my bugs, what the heck is that?” Asked Clarice with fear in her voice.

A big, dark shape emerged from deep under the grassy bank.  Bortle shivered when he realized that he was looking at the legendary King Nightfeeder!  The King was rarely seen and was said to only venture out at night to feed on mice and birds.  Many even claimed he was a myth.  But, no, he was real, alright, and he was headed straight for Clarice and Bortle.  His huge, gaping mouth was slightly open, his lower jaw disfigured from some past battle.  A big scar traced from the corner of his mouth, up and around one eye, and then across his massive flat head.  He cast a big shade across the whole riffle.

“Uuuhhh… Behold the King,” stammered Bortle.

King Nightfeeder stopped and looked sideways at Bortle and Clarice.

“Shut up, you douchebag,” dismissed the King. “I’ve sat under that bank and listened to you two losers talk about young Mike over there for too long?  While you two idiots waste your time on nonsense, Mike over there’s been practicing.  And, now he’s accomplished something that you lickspittles could never do.  That’s right, the land leap of terror.  You’re lookin’ at the only other trout in this place to ever pull that one off and it almost killed me.”

The old King snorted some disdainful bubbles towards the two cowardly fish and then drifted down to the moss rock where Mike stared in awe at the big king.

“Mike,” said the King softly. “I’ve waited years to see another of our kind show the courage, the tenacity, and the skill to one day take my place in this world.”

Mike tentatively flicked his tail to move a bit closer to the King.  He was real! And, he was totally awesome.

“Mike,” continued the King. “I.. I’m not much longer for this world.  I’ve lived my time.  I’ve fought my battles.  This place needs a new King.”

The King then reached out a meaty fin and anointed Mike as his heir.

“You, Mike, will be the new king of our world,” said the King with dramatic effect. “You will be known as… King Land Leaper.”

King Nightfeeder then drifted away, back under his bank.  He was never seen again.  Bortle and Clarice moved upstream to a new riffle, too ashamed to stick around.  Over the years King Land Leaper grew to colossal proportions, feasting on land hoppers ,dragonflies, and even mice like the old king.  Most of all he enjoyed teaching his craft to the young fry coming up in the world.